Sunday, March 5, 2017

Interview: Susannah Simpson, author of Geography of Love and Exile

                             

Welcome back! Today's interview is with Susannah Simpson, author of the poetry collection titled Geography of Love and Exile, published by Cervena Barva Press. Susannah has been kind enough to share with us her experience entering the world of publishing, no doubt a topic that will be of great interest to readers of this blog. If you like what you hear from Susannah today, please make sure to pick up a copy of her book!

On to the interview!

Where did the idea for this collection start?
Susannah: Probably my poem Band-i-Amir was the start of Geography of Love & Exile. I wrote it almost 40 years ago when I was a kid living in upstate New York farm country and found myself still profoundly affected by the beauty of Afghanistan. My family had been living in Afghanistan and had been back in the States 6 or seven years when I wrote it. While we were in Afghanistan we took a family vacation to the Helmand Valley (Central Afghanistan) to see Band-i-Amir. It is a remarkable collection of glacial runoff lakes which have an unearthly blue-turquoise hue. The name loosely translated from Persian means “king: who’s memory and spirit will never die”  I am routinely haunted by places I have lived, the images, smells, and sounds stay with me and live inside me. Some might call it a form of obsession--for example, there is an otherwise unremarkable street in Key West that drifts into my interior vison; I see the shade on the sidewalk under one of the overhanging banyan trees, and the sun on the grey clapboard siding of a particular house on Evernia St. I don’t know why that particular vision erupts or subsides, or even why that street, or that house. But my poem Cayo Hueso is a direct result of that deep nostalgia which manifests as a poetic homage.

Had you ever published anything quite like this before?

Susannah: This is my first published book---my poems have been published in a number of literary journals—but this is the first published full length collection. I have two more manuscripts waiting for final proof, editing, and publishing. The next book: Death, Desire and Dishabille (which is French for half-undressed!) is a two-part collection of poems. The first section examines different kinds of death and the second half are poems which explore different kinds of sensuality. The third book is a collection of studies of people and creatures titled: Etudes.

How long did this project take to complete?

Susannah: I started submitting poems to literary journals in 2005, and by 2010 I began putting the manuscript together. This was an intuitive process because as I looked at piles of poems I began to see how the poems were aligning themselves into an organic order. THEY really made the decisions about arrangement and final thematic thread of the book. This manuscript was ready for publication (minus some minor tweaking) in early 2011 and was accepted for publication in the winter of 2011, then finally rolled off the presses in 2016.

For those of out there who are still seeking a publisher, how did you eventually connect with Cervena Barva Press? Can you discuss the process?

Susannah: I was fortunate to meet NYC poet George Held at a workshop he was teaching. At that time I was hosting a monthly poetry reading on Long Island and invited him to be a featured reader. George is a gifted teacher and a prolific writer. At this count he has 13 or more books of poetry published, has been nominated for Pushcart prize and is asked to read all over the New York area. He became a mentor and inspiration to me, so when my manuscript was ready I showed it to him. He then recommended I contact Cervena Barva’s publisher. I contacted her, told her George had suggested I submit to her, then sent my manuscript. Within about two days she replied with an acceptance for publication. The publisher is running a small press, working full-time and doing her own writing, so she is very, very busy. Originally the book was set to come out in 2013, then 2014, 2015 and finally it happened in 2016. I wasn’t privy to the whys and wherefores of the delays as these were behind the scenes, but I admit there were times when I had lost hope of ever seeing my book in print. As it turned out the book is beautifully done and I am very pleased.

You’ve lived in a number of interesting locations. What place would you return to if you could?

Susannah: My sisters and I often talk about returning to Afghanistan, but are afraid that years of war, conflict, and destruction would make it be too sad to go back. More recently I fell in love with and really long to go back to Johnson City, NY. Johnson City is a grimy, factory town but oh, does it have soul! In fact I am convinced the Susquehanna River and I are soul mates.  As a result of my love affair with Johnson City , I wrote and got to read a portion of my  tribute 16 stanza poem a “Johnson City” on WSKG/NPR during April 2011’s National Poetry Month—that was a high point!

What inspires you as a poet?

Susannah: Other writers inspire me. I was first deeply influenced by WWI poets Sassoon and Wilfred Owen. I know when I am reading a really fine author when I find myself itching to write while I am reading them. It ALWAYS happens when I read Hemingway, Fitzgerald and especially the Soldier poets of the Vietnam War: Weigl, Bowen. Also Joy Harjo, Szymborska and a super favorite of mine: Naomi Shihab Nye. These writers inspire me to edit out any bullshit and get to the heart of the matter.

What advice can you give to poets and authors who are just getting started?

Susannah: Rector the founder of the MFA Writing Seminars at Bennington used to show the clip from Glen Garry Glenn Cross to the new students. It is the scene where Alec Baldwin is shaming the salesman to: “A-B-C --Always be closing!” Or as Churchill said: “Never, never give up!” If your poems are rejected, send them out again right away to someone else. If one bookstore or coffee shop won’t let you host a reading—find another. In this predominant L-A-N-G-U-A-G-E poetry scene, Narrative poetry gets a bad rap as old-fashioned, sentimental or confessional AND self-indulgent, but narrative poets are storytellers and it is through our commonalities, our shared human emotional devastations, fears, and ecstasies-- these stories which offer connection. Who could say narrative poets are not needed in this dystopian and polarized political climate?

Emily Dickinson or Edgar Allan Poe?

Susannah: Of course I admire the brevity and clarity of Dickinson and am thrilled by the lush edginess of Poe—but I am more of a Rumi, Rilke and Neruda girl. If anyone needs to sway a lover—Neruda’s Sonnet 17 is a guaranteed home run!

What your favorite movie from the 80’s?

Susannah:  Hands down-Out of Africa—I re-watch it every year. I love everything about it—the music, sweeping cinematography, Victorian costumes, steamy love scenes—and the part where I always cry—not when Finch-Hatten dies—but when Baroness Blixen has to say goodbye to Farah—and to Africa. I suppose it evokes in me the distress I felt saying goodbye to my first love, Afghanistan—a place I had spent my childhood.

Where can we buy your book?

Susannah: 



Thanks so much for sharing your insight with us Susannah! Readers- go out and pick up a copy of Geography of Love and Exile today! You will not regret owning this incredibly original collection of poetry.

This is the first in our new series of author interviews. As mentioned before, it's been a little while since our last series, but we're excited to get started again meeting the newest and most exciting new writers out there. Who's next?

As always, check out what's cookin' on my twitter page, @RimerTom for more author interviews and news from me as I continue on in my seemingly never-ending quest toward Author-dom.

Cheers,
Tom



Wednesday, March 1, 2017

Switching Gears



This means many things, okay? For one, switching gears means a new start on a new manuscript. My last novel is still very much in play... but, I think, interest in it (from a number of folks) has waned and I'm ready to starting exploring something fresh. I think switching gears should be invigorating and will allow me to return to the old project in time with a renewed zest (and hopefully ideas for revision).

I also have a great outline for my next novel. Something totally different. It's a similar genre, but otherwise I'm really straying from my comfort zone on this one. I've been told to "write what I know" and to "write what interests me". I'm trying to strike a good balance between that and "writing what others (particularly publishers) are interested in". It's tough and certainly causing some strife between competing parties in my author-brain, but I think it's good for me... whatever it brings.

The switching of gears will also, once again, include the direction of this blog. I spent a great deal of time in past years interviewing a wide range of talented authors, with the intent to really learn more about the craft in general, experiences with agents and publishers, and generally attempting to get the word out about hidden gems in Book-Land. I took a long break from that, choosing to focus for a while on the blogging/documenting of my own experience trying to break into publishing. With the start of this new project, I'd like to once again clean my lenses, and take another walk through a series of author interviews.

Would you be interested in giving us some insight into your experience getting published? I am in the process of scheduling my next set of "Author Interviews". It's a super easy way to get your name out there and eyes on your newest works. I also make sure to share my blog posts with my twitter following @RimerTom... which mainly consists of people interested in either reading, writing, or publishing great works.

Are you the next great author? Please let me know if you'd like to participate!

Cheers,
Tom

Thursday, August 18, 2016

It's Time to Query


For those of you who have been tracking my progress on this novel over the years... I'm sorry. I couldn't have possibly taken longer to get to this moment, which I'm sure made for some anticlimactic reading.

But yes... it's time. I'm "ready". Quotation marks are being used here because I'm not exactly sure what I even mean by "ready". What I do know is that, while I'm not 100% satisfied with the manuscript, I'm not sure that I would ever be 100% satisfied with the manuscript. So, for that reason, I'm "ready". "Ready" to start querying some smaller, independent publishing houses. "Ready" (and honestly a little bit nervous) to finally engage the elusive literary agent. I've read all of the "What Not To Do" articles and the "What You Always Need To Do" articles. If there's ever been something written on this process, I've looked it over.

It's time.

Okay, so, what should I be expecting? Part of me is just assuming, and prepared, to either not hear anything at all... or, at best, receive a few canned messages that sound a little like, "It's just not what we're looking for at this time." If that happens, I'm telling myself, I will be cool and not caught off guard.

And if I'm right and I experience exactly what I'm expecting? Well, then I'm prepared to open up my laptop and start brainstorming my next "amazing-idea-that-came-from-some-dream-I-had, that-would-be-perfect-for-a-book."

This will happen, either for this novel or the next. Or the next... or...

And that's cool too.

Wish me luck?

Love,
Tom

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Saturday, August 29, 2015

When It's Time to Let Your Novel Fly the "Nest"



Writing a novel is a little bit like raising a teenager. Or, so I assume. I haven't yet had the pleasure of raising a teenager. But, from what I gather, they're pretty much the same thing.

Pretty much.

Every parent gets to a point where it's time to take a deep breath, drop your kid of somewhere far from home, and pay someone else a buttload of money to turn them into a respectable member of society. To me, that's bares a terrifying similarity to the author/novel relationship. It's where I find myself right now, in fact.

Think about it. You've coddled and cooed to your "work-in-progress" for so long now that people have started staring at you in the self-checkout line at Stop & Shop. Sometimes, you let others look at your novel (kid) and half-heartedly listen to their concerns and thoughts on possible improvement. Maybe you've even bragged about your book (kid) on social media so much so that your closest family and friends have blocked you. No one wants to see pictures of your kid anymore... or hear about the novel you've been working on for the better part of the last few years. It's time to let go.

You've done enough.

Whatever will be, will be... right? At some point, you just can't edit anymore. You can't show it to anymore betas. You just need to open up the front door and say, "We need your room for our new craft-space/Ebay-room. So, get out."

While I'm not 100% there just yet (and who ever really is), I think I'm super close. I've nurtured this thing and pushed it along the best I know how. It's time to put it in someone else's hands and see what comes back. Sure, on some cold winter nights, I'll be sitting at home wondering what kind of shenanigans my novel is getting into. I'll be worried that it will connect with the wrong crowd and come back home to me unrecognizable and a total waste of my time and money.

God, that sounds awful. That's not going to happen, right?

Right?

Ah, well. The point is, sometimes it is just freaking time. Enough is enough.

Love,
Tom



Wednesday, August 5, 2015

Yup, I'm Still Writing


Well, hello. Been a little while, huh? I know that I can, at times, neglect this blog and my readers, but I always manage to find my way back. Someway, somehow. Rest assured, I have still been at it. I've actually been writing, editing, reading, and revising so much that I've not had time to talk about writing, editing, reading, or revising.

You get the picture.

At first, I started with a legit break for the #AmWriting world and community. My book has been through two full drafts/rounds of revision. I've had the first pair of eyes grace the pages of the novel that I've been working on for, going on, two years now. As I've said, time and again, I find that I need to rest my eyes and "break" from my work-in-progress. I actually haven't returned to the book for the past few months, but that doesn't mean I haven't stayed busy.

For starters, I've been reading. To me, reading is the ultimate homework for an author. In particular, I wanted to read works of some new, semi-undiscovered, authors in my genre (YA SciFi) to see if my novel would play nicely in the current market and how it might compare to other books out there. After that, I made a strong attempt to read works that were completely different from my own. Classic works, a couple of Stephen King, and two more mindless Robert Langdon adventures by Dan Brown. I even started reading drafts of some friends' respective works-in-progress. Honestly, I have loved everything I've been reading and it has made me all the more thirsty to get back to my own writing.

But, I haven't immediately to returned to my novel. Instead, I've done something I claimed that I would never do. I have started working on a totally new project, of a completely different length, genre, etc. It's been fun and has given me the break I've so needed.

(more on my mysterious new work, coming in a later blog, on some other day, when I'm feeling like elaborating.)

And this brings me back to what I'm always going on about. Take breaks. Read new stuff. Write new stuff. It'll end up making your old stuff, more than just stuff, all over again.

Love,
Tom

Saturday, March 28, 2015

Thoughts From a Beta-Reader


Last night, my manuscript was handed back to me (by my first beta-reader) with a ton of revision suggestions. Most everything was scribbled into the margins, but there was also an extra page handed to me with some overall thoughts and comments. We had an opportunity to sit down and talk through her notes, questions, concerns, etc. Here's what I learned:

  • Some of my characters are just written better than others. This was a little surprising to me, but I completely understood what my beta was saying. She felt that she just knew some of these folks super well and that others needed to be fleshed out more. Some of her most directed comments were about my protagonist. Eek. Sure, she's driving the plot and clearly central to the story... but, it was some of her supporting cast members that were the most vivid characters.
  • Some characters sounded too similar. This was extremely helpful. I didn't necessarily pick up on this while I was writing. It is super important for each character to have an entirely unique voice.
  • Word choice. There were some words/phrases that I used a bit too much. One in particular stood out to my beta: plopped. She commented that she saw it a few times and that she didn't think it really had a place in my novel... even once. Funny thing: I don't remember ever even using it.
  • Plot holes. She definitely dug some up and now it's my job to fill them back in. Fortunately, the two of us were able to chat about how I might do that. I already have a ton of great ideas.
  • Realistic injuries/healing time. She reminded me that my characters aren't Jack Bauer and that this isn't an episode of 24. She said that I need to make sure that injuries inflicted on my characters are given a realistic amount of healing time. She's right.
  • Consistency with a new alien language. The example given to me was Tolkien's use of language in LOTR/The Hobbit. She emphasized that when I allow a new species to speak in their own language that I must know exactly what they are saying at all times. There's needs to be consistency. If an alien character is saying "hello" in his/her own language, then he/she needs to say "hello" the same way each time. If I'm inconsistent, my readers will certainly notice.
There's more, of course, but this should give you an idea of some of the comments I received. I plan to spend today working on these revisions. I'm also giving myself a deadline of a week to make all of these fixes. I don't want it to sit too long before I hand it off to my next reader.

This is my process. As I always say, different authors won't necessarily do it this way, nor should they. Find your own process and make it work for you.

Keep checking back. Things are moving fast right now!

Love,
Tom

Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Beta-Reader-ing in Real-Time

It's weird to hear my character's names coming out of someone else's mouth. My first beta reader (not coincidentally, also my wife) has been talking about the book, sharing in her general excitement, as she reads. I didn't exactly expect it all to go down this way. My assumption was that she'd read the manuscript and then hand it back with a bunch of red scribbles, a coffee-stain or two, and some general thoughts and comments. What's happened instead, however, has been completely unexpected and super-helpful.

What's cool is that I'm getting to see and hear her reaction to my words, in real-time. As she reads, I'm listening to what she tells me about characters she both wants to hear more about and characters she needs to hear more about. Her thought bubbles are right out there to see, which is great for me, as the author. I know if she's curious about the things she's supposed to be curious about and if her attention is focused on something that it possibly wasn't intended to be focused on. When she has a "woah" moment after reading a chapter, I'm hearing about that right away. When she's kind of like, "what just happened", I can start re-working that scene in my mind, immediately. She's doing a lot of foreshadowing and predicting on the direction of the story, which is so much fun to listen to. I want to know what the reader is thinking, chapter by chapter, line by line, word by word. So far, this experience is giving me just that.

If only we always could have such insight into what our readers are thinking.
 
 
Then again...

Love,
Tom